tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4578527808639052137.post2050851632366138271..comments2023-11-11T05:50:15.023-08:00Comments on Enrique Freeque's Forum: "Club Manhattan" by Peter WeissmanAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13736768855641666746noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4578527808639052137.post-37828315905809375332010-10-03T14:53:53.398-07:002010-10-03T14:53:53.398-07:00One one of the problems of the earlier version, as...One one of the problems of the earlier version, as I saw it, was the need to integrate the two sections in this piece more than I had, which was where that addition you refer to came from. Since this is both a short stand-alone piece and a chapter, however, which is my M.O. as a book writer, I have to do such things in a way that satisfies the larger (book-length) concoction while not undoing the short story integrity of the chapter. My guess is, when I finish the whole and go over the parts (a year or two form now), I'll probably add another musing, perhaps even philosophical reference in the Denise section that applies to the generalized Manhattan Club description in the first part, to further unify the piece.Peter Weissmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05961649179039241933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4578527808639052137.post-81717136308393185132010-10-03T13:22:24.348-07:002010-10-03T13:22:24.348-07:00Happy to. I like how you inserted "Club Manh...Happy to. I like how you inserted "Club Manhattan" into the story this time around too, among many other instances I could mention.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13736768855641666746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4578527808639052137.post-59458114772659844852010-10-03T13:19:52.978-07:002010-10-03T13:19:52.978-07:00Thanks for redoing it as per my specifications, Br...Thanks for redoing it as per my specifications, Brent. Not every editor is as considerate.Peter Weissmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05961649179039241933noreply@blogger.com